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Gone to the Edge

By Jerusha
Published: November 16, 2008
Updated: November 16, 2008

Flash challenge winner 'Edge' ended on 16 November 2008.

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	Jerusha - November 17, 2008 Thank you, Harry. In truth, it's the first time I've tried a rondeau, but having done it, I like the form very much.
	HarryB - November 17, 2008 Nicely understated composition, Jerusha. A lot hidden here and more effective for being so.

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From the Valley of My Youth

By Jerusha
Published: November 8, 2008
Updated: November 8, 2008

A Poem

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	Veemem - November 9, 2008 Don't give up just ask bint to edit for you and I'm sure she will, the second one is best and the second line of the seventh stanza just needs fixing. I love the theme of the poem and you have handled it very well, what we really need on this site is a facility for previewing our work and editing if needs be before submitting, that way we can fiddle with them intil we are satisfied. But I'm sure bint will come to your rescue. Val x
	Jerusha - November 9, 2008 I give up on this, Val. My edit got all screwed up and I don't know why.
	Veemem - November 9, 2008 Oh our posts must have crossed I see now that you have done it. Great. Valx
	Veemem - November 9, 2008 Tha second version is much better you took out the repetitivebefore me in the first stanza that didn't sound right. In the 7th stanza of the 2nd version, should that read and a woman's reality or A woman's reality? I also liked the very last stanza that you have tacked on after edit Put altogether it would be a great poem Val x

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Kiss Of Torment

By Valerie Muriel Mckinley
Published: November 7, 2008
Updated: November 7, 2008

Another piece from Greece, not so picturesque this time.

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	Gerry. - November 10, 2008 Val, Indeed as Harry states--watch out for the females of the species. (Not to be trusted) all blood suckers lol ;-)... Gerry xxx.
	HarryB - November 7, 2008 and bringing with it the West Nile this year. You know it's only the females, don't you ... you can make a poem out of anything , you devil.

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Notes From Greece

By Valerie Muriel Mckinley
Published: November 7, 2008
Updated: November 7, 2008

First Impressions

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Gerry. - November 10, 2008
Nice one Val--It took me back...

Gerry xxx.

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But Not for Them

By Jerusha
Published: November 6, 2008
Updated: November 6, 2008

A poem.

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Minaret

By Di42
Published: November 3, 2008
Updated: November 3, 2008

I can see the mosque from my balcony, its been abandoned for many years.

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into silence

By delph_ambi
Published: November 3, 2008

Flash challenge winner 'silence' ended on 2 Nov 2008

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An Absurd Nightmare

By Valerie Muriel Mckinley
Published: November 2, 2008
Updated: November 2, 2008

Flash challenge winner 'absurd' ended on 19 Oct 08

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HarryB - November 4, 2008
I'll have a cup of whatever Val's been drinking. Beatle-ish brew, Val. I loved it � every wild line of it.

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I'm Still Here!

By Di42
Published: November 2, 2008
Updated: November 2, 2008

Flash challenge winner 'Invisible' ended 26 Oct 08

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...For Dust.

By sunken
Published: November 1, 2008
Updated: November 1, 2008

On the fictional occasion of not being dumped on the morning after the night before�

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	Jerusha - November 4, 2008 I girded myself to not like this poem. Surprise! You had me completely at "It�s nearly quarter to a smile." Wonderful, poignant poem. Heady imagery spoken economically. Thank you!
	sunken - November 4, 2008 Thanks for reading, Ms. Val. Sorry about the late reply. The poem's about her still being there. She's asleep and he's awake. He knows, from experience, that this will probably be the first and last time that he'll wake up with her in his bed. They have a habit of doing a runner on him when they've sobered up. Yes it happens to blokes too. I'm always quite chuffed when they get interpreted differently tho. Thanks again for reading. And while I'm here, thanks to that smashing Ms. Bint for flagging me up. Ahem. Now there's an image. Cheers Val. s u n k s but mummy, i don't want to be an accountant
	Veemem - November 1, 2008 That's lovely sunky, I can see what bint meant about the last line, but I think that it could be read either way.. it could mean that she is still there , on the other hand she could be gone and you are just seeing her because you are pining for her Ohhh I'll just get a hankie to mop up my tears. sniffs Val xx

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